Learner response to Ignite – feedback was lost. No WWW/EBI – need to go back and add this. Score out of 20 was 13. Also need a paragraph linking it to your critical investigation.

Critical Investigation proposal – title works and clearly sets out what you want to do. You also have a clear hypothesis which is very important. You may end up disagreeing with it but that’s not a problem.

Linked production – needs some thought. No hurry but keep it in mind.

Not much by way of MIGRAIN research – copy in the rest of your summer project research (at least what is relevant). Surely there will be textual analysis from the summer project that will be useful here? If not, put it in your research plan!

For SHEP – you’ve actually got some great stuff BUT it’s all research. You need to be able to put it in your own words. Bear this is mind for your research plan/notes and quotes. 

NEED your own ideas and perspective here. Historical angle not covered at all – should link to TV history – how were gender stereotypes used in TV 10, 20, 30 years ago? For political – great point about the subtle feminism running through but make sure it’s your own point and more of this please!

Theories disappointing. For the research plan, fair start but need more. Copy it into your Notes and Quotes document but before doing any research do some more on the research plan.

Publish this on your blog with your next steps in this project.

- start with finishing the ignite presentation learner response, and add what i will do for my critical investigation.

-further develop my critical investigation proposal

- do a detailed notes and quotes document. all research about the show and other shows too.